Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Guest author: RL Taylor

RL Taylor is the author of The Last Ms. Understanding. In 2009 he received five Shades of Romance Magazine (SORMAG) Readers' Choice Awards including: Romance Book of the Year, Fiction Book of the Year and New Author of the Year. The shocking truth is - he's just getting started. His next release is titled Champagne, Jellybeans, and Chocolate.

There's a lot you can do to edit your own book. Your objective is to make the material that's already there more readable, more appealing, more understandable and more inviting to the reader. That's it. That's the big goal that every editor chases when they sit before a manuscript.

Omit Needless Words. In short, if there's a word in the sentence that can be removed without damaging the thought, it should be removed. That alone can dramatically improve your writing.

Most people think of editing right on the hard copy, paper and ink, with pen in hand. Okay, feel free to do that. Personally, I like to use the computer screen. Remember, if you make the changes on the screen, they're made. No one has to re-enter the material you've just edited.

Search the document for the word 'that.' Almost 75% of the time this word can be eliminated without changing the thought of the sentence. Next comes the word 'then.' Get rid of it if you can.

Search for the two letters 'ly' and you'll find most of the adverbs in your work. An adverb modifies a verb. He didn't just run, he ran quickly. Remove the adverbs. Remove them and use a better verb. Get rid of the adverbs. Adverbs can turn up at the end of a sentence, frequently.

Try and eliminate: usually, nearly, barely. Also, be wary of 'often' and 'seems.' If words, phrases or entire sentences can be removed without affecting the work, then remove them. Do a quick word count before you begin. Your goal is to have 10 percent fewer words than when you started... and watch your writing get better and better.

RL Taylor


Jewel Amethyst said...

great editting tips.

Chris Stovell said...

Eeeek! So true! Let me outta here and back to my writing!

Liane Spicer said...

I definitely (oops, there's another adverb) weigh on the the side of wordiness. When I edit I'm likely to end up with 10% more words than I started with so I have to be really disciplined about the weeding, cutting and trimming.

Liane Spicer said...

ChrisH, good to see you here! Um, *clears throat* writing blogs are the exception - that's time well spent! :D