Over the last few months I conducted a writing workshops for a few teens. One young lady brought in a story that was quite interesting. After we read and critiqued it, she shared that the story had been a school assignment. Her teacher had asked them to write a story that included several elements including a pueblo blanket. It was clear from the list of items that the teacher wanted the students to write a story with a Native American theme. The young lady, however, decided she did not know enough about Native American culture to write comfortably about it and without the option for research she wrote something with which she could relate and in which the required elements made only cameo appearances.
I'm not sure how her teacher responded but I applauded her innate understanding of the idea of writing what you know. This is a complicated and often misunderstood concept. If it is interpreted at its most basic level it would mean the police should be knocking on Maggie King's door and let's not even begin to discuss Pynk. Writing what you know may have more to do with writing about emotions, feelings, and experiences you understand, even if they are then set on Mars, in locales you have researched but never lived in.
You may never have been accused of murder but you may have felt the injustice of being misunderstood or having your motives questioned.
You may not have lost a brother but you have felt the loss of something that meant a lot to you.
You may never have flown in a spaceship, walked on another planet, or encountered an alien race but you've probably felt the exhilaration of a new, exciting, and deliciously dangerous experience.
You may not have killed anyone but you may have felt the rage or longing that took you to the brink of committing a crime.
What has been your experience writing about locales and experiences foreign to you? What steps do you take to ensure your writing is authentic?
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Sunday, July 30, 2017
Thursday, July 27, 2017
What's in Your Swag?
Today’s
post is about swag. You know, that stuff authors give out at events to get
people to remember them.
I
have several events coming up, so I had to think long and hard about the
swag I’m going to give away. It’s not an easy decision for me, as is true with
many other authors, because I want something that stands out and I can’t spend
a lot on it.
There are authors out there
who give away tote bags, bookmarks (and not just any bookmarks—the dangly kind
with a charm on the end), cute little spiral-bound notebooks with a book cover
printed on the front, even seed packets (which are great for authors who write
about farmers and gardeners, but I’m not one of those authors), but I don’t
have the kind of money one needs to give away things like that.
So at the risk of being
the most boring author out there, I’ve ordered postcards. Again. Each one is
printed with one of my book covers on the front and my photo and social media
URLs on the back. I love how they look—I just wish I could do something really
out-of-the-box. But out-of-the-box is expensive.
I’ve also ordered
bookmarks. Again. These have the covers of each of the three books in my
current series. Like the postcards, I think they’re nice-looking bookmarks. I
hope people use them.
But in
addition to the postcards and the bookmarks, I have managed to include two more
interesting things.
First,
I did a little research and learned that some of the most popular items for
authors to give away are pens. Thus, I have ordered pens with my name and a
small graphic of a rose on them. This is the same rose photo I use on my
website’s Contact Me page and some of my newsletters. It’s not just any rose;
it’s a rose from a bouquet my husband gave me when I signed my first contract with
a publisher. It means a lot to me and I love the photo, so I use it often.
Second,
my most recent book and my next book are both set in Scotland. What comes to
mind when I think of Scotland? Sure, the beauty, the majesty, the lochs, et
cetera, et cetera. But I can’t give those things away.
What
comes to mind next? For me, it’s shortbread (it’s always about the food, as far
as I’m concerned). Buttery, crumbly, delicious shortbread. I found a website (worldmarket.com)
where I could buy twenty individually-wrapped two-packs of Walker’s Shortbread
Cookies for about $11.00. Since I only needed fifty packages (this particular
swag is for gift bags at the Suffolk Mystery Authors Festival in August), I
could get away with spending $33.00 or so and still have some cookies left over
for another event. My plan is to staple a package of cookies to one of my
Scotland-themed postcards.
What
do you think? Is it memorable, or would you do something different?
I’ve
got a book club appearance coming up in a couple weeks. The club is discussing
my book set in Hawaii. I’d like to take a homemade dessert with me that the
members can share at the meeting—something with coconut or passion fruit or macadamia nuts. I
don’t know how big the group is, but I figured if I make a large pan of
something, there will be enough for everyone. Smaller, more personal events
like book club appearances make it easy for me to take something because I love
to cook and I love to come up with foods that connect somehow with the setting
of the book the club is reading.
Incidentally,
I do host giveaways once in a while through my newsletter. For the giveaways, I
like to do something a bit more elaborate than postcards and bookmarks. For my
last giveaway (to celebrate the release of my book set in Hawaii) I had a
reusable shopping bag that I stocked with tropical-themed items and Hawaiian
foods (pre-packaged, like macadamia nuts and candies). For my next giveaway I’ll
probably award a tote bag with some Scottish-themed items.
I’d
like to hear what other authors are using for swag. What do you give away, if
anything? Is there something you received at an author event that was
particularly memorable? Share your ideas in the comments below—I’d love to hear
them and I’m sure other writers would, too.
Saturday, July 22, 2017
Book Promotion: What Works for Me and What Doesn't
Like many of my fellow authors, I’m on an eternal quest for
promotional ideas—preferably ones that generate sales. For the first book in my
Hazel Rose Book Group series I had a hit-or-miss approach, but I’ve been much
more pro-active with #2 in the series. Here’s my assessment of my activity and findings:
In February, I appeared on Virginia This Morning. I was
beyond nervous and recount the experience on my blog. But my sales soared that day and I got an invitation to visit a book group.
I used an e-mail service called Ereader News Today (ENT) and also had a huge boost in sales. I’ll be going that route again. My
publisher wanted me to use BookBub but I balked
at forking over close to $1,000 (ENT is $50).
I’ve joined four tweet groups on Facebook. My Australian
friend Christina Larmer invited me to the first one, which is “secret.” All I
can say is that it’s for cozy authors.
Next I tried T4US, a group that anyone can join. It has many
members and they tweet everything from books to skin care to jewelry.
A member of the aforementioned secret cozy group sponsored
me for Authors Social Media Support Group (ASMSG). This is a multi-function
group with a newsletter, several tweet groups, forums, etc. I haven’t tapped
into ten percent of what ASMSG has to offer, but I share tweets with the group daily.
My most recent tweet group is part of the Mystery Authors
International Facebook group. I've been a member for less than a week but already love the enthusiasm and support. We can all use
a hefty dose of that.
There are lots of tweet groups and you can find the right
one for you. It’s a great way to get retweets. Everyone who posts on a given
day is expected to retweet all the other posts for that day.
I’ve created what amounts to a portfolio of memes to
accompany my tweets. This is the fun part for me. Here's an example:
What else? I’ve been interviewed for radio and podcasts. As
for blogs, I continue to post here on NovelSpaces, on my own blog at
Maggieking.com/blog, and on Lethal Ladies Write. Aside from the requisite
Facebook and Tweet accounts, YouTube, Instagram, Google Plus, and LinkedIn complete my
platform. I have all but abandoned Pinterest.
But how does all of this activity impact sales? Aside from
the obvious sales boosts from my TV appearance and ENT promo, it’s hard to
measure, especially when I’m using several promotional tools on any given day. But
it all helps. Before joining these tweet groups, I’d been a half-hearted
tweeter, always feeling like I was shooting at a moving target. But some of
these tweeters have thousands and thousands of followers—so with that many
retweets hurling around in cyberspace, someone
must be taking notice.
As for Facebook groups, there are hundreds of them and I belong
to many—but, aside from a few, I’m not sure if my posts make any impact. And these days I feel much the same about my Facebook author page.
Here’s an idea I haven’t tried yet. Amy Vansant has a
service called Authors
Cross Promotion and one of the options is a Series Spotlight Newsletter
Feature. Here is more info. If anyone has used Amy’s services, please share your experience.
Of course, engagement is key on social media, not promotion per se. But my purpose in writing this post is to consider promotional tools. And the best tool of all: my next book. I hear
that time and again from seasoned authors. So excuse me while I get back to writing
mine!
Please weigh in with your thoughts and suggestions. What
works for you? What doesn’t?
Friday, July 14, 2017
Don’t make me angry.
Here in the UK, I’m involved in
the running of Cheshire Book Connections. Based in the heart of England, we
describe ourselves as “a book club with a difference.” Unlike the more
traditional clubs where members read the same book and everyone discusses it at
the next meeting, we have a guest speaker every month, who provides
entertainment and generates discussion. Usually the speaker is an author, but
it can be anyone who is connected with books. We proclaim that our club is “for
lovers of all things bookish” and speakers can vary from authors to bloggers to
book cover designers. Do such clubs exist near where you live?
At our last meeting, the speaker
was an author, Robyn Cain. Robyn writes in several genres, including horror,
and it was fascinating to hear how her horror stories provide a release for her
anger.
It got me thinking about influences
on my own writing. I don’t often get angry, and I don’t write horror. Even at
my age, I rarely read horror and can only watch the really scary movies in
daylight, if at all. My genre is romance suspense with more than a hint of
steamy sex. I had a lot of fun coming up with my logo, only getting “angry”
when it didn’t quite line up.
So if feeling angry can influence
someone to write horror, what might influence an author to write romance
suspense with explicit scenes of passion?
Delving deep into my inner soul I
confess, for me, it is a love of love. I adore reading romance, watching
romance and hearing about people who fall in love. I’m happily married and
cherish the gift of being with somebody I love everyday of my life. Knowing
that a man loves a woman, or a woman loves a woman, or a man loves a man—it all
cheers my heart. Whilst love alone may not make the world go around, it
certainly helps to make us human.
Well, that might explain my
romance, but where does the suspense come from? My stories are not for the
faint-hearted—they’re not cosy or sweet. My heroes and heroines have to fight
for love. They must overcome difficulties, and survive dangers. I deal with
issues of physical abuse, sexual abuse, kidnapping and murder. I don’t have
enough anger to feed these themes. But I do have a need for challenges in my
life. As a young child I wanted to do well at school and grow up to make more
money than we were used to having at home. Training to be an accountant left me
determined to pass my professional exams. Having done that I was driven to work
up to the position of finance director. At the age of forty, admittedly urged
on by my husband, I cycled a hundred miles in one day. Twice! I even learned to
ride a motorbike. One of my latest challenges was ticked off when Black Opal
Books issued me with a publishing contract for my first book, The Secret At
Arnford Hall.
I wonder, therefore, if my desire
for suspense comes from needing to give my characters challenges. Of course, I
go one step further in my stories and create adversities for them to overcome.
Or perhaps it’s just that I love thrillers as well as romance, and I infiltrate
my stories with hooks of danger, to keep the reader turning the page.
That just leaves me to ponder
where the steamy sex scenes come from… I’ll let you ponder that too.
Monday, July 10, 2017
SEVEN STEPS I TOOK TO GO FROM SELF-PUBLISHED TO A BOOK DEAL
Greetings! I was looking through some interesting articles and blog posts that I'd written years ago. I thought I'd share this one, which my fellow author Brandon Massey asked me to write for his blog. This was written 10 years ago, in 2007, just after Dr. Feelgood was released by Kensington Books. I listed the 7 steps that I took to go from being a self-published author, to being offered a book deal by a major publisher in 2001.
I thought I'd share it today. Some, if not all of the 7 suggestions are still relevant today. Social media is much more of a factor now, and self-publishing is way easier and more prevalent now. New authors, see - there is so much work to be done in order to get signed by a major, before and after you've penned your book. Enjoy!
SEVEN STEPS I TOOK TO GO FROM SELF-PUBLISHED TO A BOOK
DEAL
By Marissa Monteilh
Author, May December Souls,
The Chocolate Ship, Hot Boyz, Make Me Hot and Dr. Feelgood
First, it is important to note that while many
authors secure agency representation, and/or sell their manuscripts
without self-publishing first, self-publishing proved to
be an important avenue that led to my two book deal
with HarperCollins in April of 2001, and opened the door
to my full-time career as an author.
You should determine whether or not self-publishing is
an option you’d like to explore. Being that I
had shopped my manuscript for nearly six months and only received offers from small publishing companies who first
wanted upfront fees (a big no-no),
and after attending Michael Baisden’s
book signing where he suggested that I self-publish
first, it was pretty much a no-brainer for me. Michael suggested that
I purchase a copy of The Self Publishing Manual by
Daniel Poynter. Not only did I run out the next day
and pick up the book, I followed every suggested step book like clockwork.
Once you decide to take this
step, do not make any excuses that will block your blessings.
The steps outlined include a time frame that is
extremely easy to follow, and the entire process took me eight months.
Before I knew it I had my first shipment of 3000 books
delivered to my home office. Holding that
bound book in your hand will surely make all of your
hard work well worth it. Stay
disciplined and follow through!
1) PROMOTE, PROMOTE, PROMOTE:
Joining the PMA – Publishers Marketing Association, and other organizations,
allowed me the opportunity to participate in various
wholesaler programs for self-published authors like Baker &
Taylor and Ingram. Wholesalers are invaluable because most bookstores
purchase from wholesalers as opposed to going to each author
directly. And, being a member of
a particular organization can
entitle you to receive big discounts from
printing companies, etc.
Invest in marketing materials
like bookmarks and flyers. Make sure prospective readers
have something in hand to remind them that your book is
out there.
Thank goodness for the Internet!!
Search the Internet for book club contact information
and send each contact person an email, offer to send review
copies, etc. Book clubs are an invaluable tool
toward spreading the word.
Search the Internet for
bookstore listings. Call the owners, visit the stores,
request book signing dates, etc. Bookstores are very
accommodating and they are usually willing to distribute your
marketing materials as well. Also, list your title on Amazon.com
and other online listings.
If you can afford to, plan
a book tour, if possible, so that you promote your
title in person. If money is an issue, sign locally in your
area. Research book fairs and other events. Focus on
spreading the word. And always bring a sign-in sheet
for readers to jot down their email addresses. Very important!
Come up with
marketing angles such as giveaways, hair salon contests, free gifts with
proof of purchase. Contact various companies whose products match
well with your book title and with the target age of your
readers and ask them to donate their goods or services.
Also, offer a free book to readers who will in turn
write a review on www.amazon.com
Contact radio stations and newspapers
and request that they do a feature story on
you and your book. Most people like to hear about
the author's journey or how that book relates to
the world or the life of the author. Find an
angle that ties in and promote it. And always research
how to write a good press release. You can email
the release or fax it. Last but not least; GET A WEBSITE. I
recommend www.pageturner.net, an awesome company that creates
websites for most AA authors.
2) TRACK SALES AND PREPARE A DISTRIBUTION SUMMARY:
One reason to self-publish is to prove that your title will sell
and that the subject matter is in demand. I
prepared a Marketing and Distribution Summary, which
the agents found very helpful. My agent used the information in his cover letters to publishers. It
should include your target market, genre, sales history,
list price, distribution strategy, reviews, media outlets,
and other avenues of promotion.
3) RESEARCH AND CONTACT
AGENTS WHO HANDLE AUTHORS IN YOUR GENRE:
Once I felt the title was
circulating fairly well, I decided to submit the self-published version to agents. I compiled a list of agents
based upon various agents I’d noticed mentioned in
the acknowledgment sections of authors in
a similar genre. I scoured the Internet for agency
listings. I flipped through the Literary Marketplace by
R.R. Bowker for specific agents who were accepting submissions. NEVER PAY AN AGENCY FEE
and check out agents to make sure they're reputable.
Once I narrowed down my list to
eight agents, I contacted each agency via telephone to see if
they were accepting submissions and if so, what the guidelines
were. I also inquired as to which agencies
were accepting email queries.
I decided I would submit
via email on the first round. I included the cover image and a brief query letter, maybe three paragraphs.
The first paragraph indicated that I was
seeking representation on my newly released, self-published title, (include word
count) and mentioned a precise one-liner as to
the plot. The second paragraph was a brief synopsis about
conflict, about the ending and lessons
learned, and the third paragraph
covered the fact that I was hard at work on my next novel.
I briefly covered the success rate of my first release. The closing sentence
was simply, “Please let me know if
you would like me to forward the perfect
bound novel, May December Souls. Thanks for your time and consideration.”
4) CREATE A COMPLETE AND PROFESSIONAL
PRESENTATION PACKAGE:
Once four of the agents contacted me and expressed interest in my complete submission, I prepared a presentation folder, which
included a cover letter, news
release, more detailed synopsis, marketing summary,
marketing brochures bookmarks, reviews and reader comments.
Obviously, I
included the bound book and a stamped, self-addressed envelope for their convenience. The Self Publishing Manual also
covers information on preparing these items.
5) LET GO AND LET GOD:
Make
sure you give an agent sufficient
time before you call to follow up. I’d say four to six
weeks. And sometimes, like in my case, they may even call
within the first week. If not, repeat Steps Three and Four
again. Be persistent.
6) ONCE AN AGENT
EXPRESSES INTEREST, CONDUCT FURTHER RESEARCH ON THE AGENT:
I contacted another author who
was also represented by the particular agent I felt
expressed the most intense sincerity and confidence in
their ability to sell my title. My agent asked me to give him
one month and within one month, we were involved in
auction. Make sure the agent is a member of
the Association of Author’s Representatives or other professional
organizations.
7) DO NOT BE AFRAID TO REQUEST
CHANGES TO THE AGENCY AGREEMENT:
There is
a book called How to Be Your Own Literary Agent by
Richard Curtis. Educate yourself on all aspects of
the agreement, ask other authors for advice, or hire an
attorney to review the contract before you sign. Most agency contracts are fairly brief. It is the publishing contact
that is quite lengthy.
Some publishing companies
are accepting submissions directly, i.e., HarperCollins, particularly
for African American authors. Skip the agency submission if
you choose to go this route, however, if you’re starting out,
an experienced agent can prove extremely valuable. And don't be unrealistic about the deal amount
offered to you. Most times we hear of dollar amounts for
book deals and the amounts are TOTALLY exaggerated.
Walk before you run, and then take time to crawl, too.
Understand that getting to the point of quitting your
job takes time.
Once you decide to sign (yeah!) I suggest
you let your agent handle the business of submitting your
title. It is very important that the two of
you build a rapport based upon mutual respect
and a fiery passion for your title. There has to be a level of trust. Inform him/her as to which houses
you would like to approach, however, follow their
lead and be patient. Know that the final decision as
to which publisher you sign with is yours.
Write on!
Marissa Monteilh
divapublishing@aol.com