tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post6093063881136977605..comments2023-08-14T10:44:59.007-04:00Comments on Novel Spaces: Yikes! Writer BloopersKeVin K.http://www.blogger.com/profile/14792797517571690942noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post-88661750959842185902011-03-07T11:23:31.705-05:002011-03-07T11:23:31.705-05:00I had two teams play football on Thanksgiving that...I had two teams play football on Thanksgiving that by their conference and schedule were unlikely to meet for a Thanksgiving match-up. A friend of mine and avid football fan picked it up, but only after it was published. Needless to say, no other reader commented on it.Jewel Amethysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14813773386476356666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post-51893722679549937742011-03-06T08:02:27.495-05:002011-03-06T08:02:27.495-05:00Well, I once made a fool of myself with a publishe...Well, I once made a fool of myself with a publisher. I'd submitted a story in which a key element was a falling orbiter -- a fictional vehicle similar in shape to the NASA shuttle but 100 times larger. Altering it's flight (fall) path was pivotal to the action. The editor bounced it back because their tech guy told them I had the aerodynamics all wrong. Since I used to fly sailplanes, aerodynamics is one of the few bits of engineering I think I have a handle on so -- egocentric newbe that I was -- I challenged their expert. And got properly schooled on the realities that a) 1,700 tonne objects -- even ones with wings and control surfaces -- do not fly like a Scheizer 1-26 and b) when the editor tells you something needs to be changed for factual reasons, change it.<br />(Happy ending: Suitably contrite, I rewrote the story and made the sale with the second submission.)KeVin K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14792797517571690942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post-83840399433189136542011-03-05T17:49:27.942-05:002011-03-05T17:49:27.942-05:00For the most part yes. I use Wikipedia a lot (and ...For the most part yes. I use Wikipedia a lot (and Google/external links that the articles have), but since I grew up using the public library for all kinds of things, I verify what I read in Wikipedia with what I find at the library.<br /><br />Everything else, I ask my friends/co-workers, who have long gotten used to me asking pointed questions about clothing, physical appearances, etc.G. B. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post-23828096261863391132011-03-05T16:15:09.442-05:002011-03-05T16:15:09.442-05:00My critique partner scrawled a note in the middle ...My critique partner scrawled a note in the middle of the manuscript for my second novel: "Who's Shari?" <br /><br />Yes, thank goodness for friends who critique. Shari is the main character in my first novel who apparently sneaked off and hid in the second.<br /><br />So far, no bloopers that got through to the final print. Or if there are, no one has mentioned them yet.Liane Spicerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05035607144500219524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post-70330108775151687642011-03-05T12:45:34.883-05:002011-03-05T12:45:34.883-05:00CHARLES, I've done similar things, especially ...<b>CHARLES</b>, I've done similar things, especially with characters' names. It makes me feel a little silly. <br /><br /><b>G</b>, it sounds as if the stories you write can't always be researched on Google. Good thing you have adventurous friends and friends-of-friends. (And, yes, bathing suits are annoying. If you have a medium-size chest, most suits fit you. But for everyone else, all bets are off. This is part of why women hate shopping for swimsuits.)Shauna Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03871768714926149114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post-58129414112301864012011-03-05T08:02:17.299-05:002011-03-05T08:02:17.299-05:00With some of the stories I've written (unpubli...With some of the stories I've written (unpublished as yet), I've gone on research blitzes to make sure that what I'm writing is plausible in the realm of the story I'm writing.<br /><br />As for mistakes that really stand out, I've made a few in my latest manuscript. There was one instance in which I had a character wear a particular kind of bathing suit and a beta-reader was thoughtful enough to point out that it was pretty much impossible for someone with the character's chest size to wear a bathing suity like that (she spoke from personal experience).<br /><br />The other involved some light BDSM, and again, my reader was thougtful enough to point out that the end result I gave never happens in real life (again, she spoke not from personal experience, but had friends who did that stuff).<br /><br />I definitely try to be as accurate as possible, which means for my wrtings, asking my female friends some point questions about certain things that I up until recently, I had no real clue about.G. B. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5594341074652821017.post-61488975039943945052011-03-05T01:24:40.947-05:002011-03-05T01:24:40.947-05:00I misspelled some of my own invented words in the ...I misspelled some of my own invented words in the second and third Talera books, and that ws despite having a series bible for easy reference on those kinds of things. I did correct 'em for the ebook releases though.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.com